Friday, September 7, 2012

CANDY FLOSS VOLCANO!

CANDY FLOSS VOLCANO!
People were living in my CANDY FLOSS VOLCANO!


One day in 1934 there were some people living
were in my CANDY FLOSS VOLCANO and they were
getting into a Rocket and BLASTING off into the distance. I got angry I said NOOOO don’t you ZOOM OUT OF HERE! You're not going anywhere.NOT ANYWHERE!
Why not you were eating my candy floss and i made it
DO NOT EAT IT AGAIN! DO YOU GET THAT!

TO BE CONTINUED!

3 comments:

  1. I love the beginning of your fairytale Alex.

    It has a great title and I like the short sharp sentences at the end of the paragraph. I look forward to the next part :)

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  2. Cool Alex. When is your next part coming out?

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  3. Hi that is awesome pieces of writing you have on your blog it really catches the volcano.

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