Tuesday, May 22, 2012

Alexandra's autumn leaves

Autumn  Leaves
1st of may.

The wind blew the leaves down on the ground.


The leaves scrunch up when children play.

The sun is blooming on
the leaves.

The leaves are crispy when you feel it.

                              By Alexandra.


12 comments:

  1. Excellent expression when you read your poem, Alexandra!

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  2. Awesome Alex, your speech is nice and clear, I reckon that it is cool to have the laughter in the background its like children playing in leaves in Autumn. Do you think it is cool to have the laughter in the background?

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    1. Neat comment Felicity! I like the sound of the laughter in the background too.

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  3. awesome story I think and cool fotobabble

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  4. Wow Alex.
    Your poem is really good.
    I like the sentence that says leaves scrunch up when children play, because I can really get a picture in my head.

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  5. "Awesome Alexandra, Cool poem and I like how you put red in the middle of you leaf".

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  6. Great Alexandra
    I like that you put your voice on the post as well!
    What is your favourite voice recoding site?

    Katrina

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  7. That is a really good piece of writing and you photo babble is really cool.

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  8. Awesome Alex,I like the idea of a photo babble. I wish I had thought of that.Your speaking is nice and clear.

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  9. Great Alex!
    Your voice is perfect.
    I like your poem too.

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  10. well done Alexandra I love your poem.
    Love Mumxxoo

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  11. Amazing! I like the last part. What was your favourite part?

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